Tuesday, July 13, 2010

Which sentence reads better?

1) Before her fingers even brushed the material, the cup was lifted away.



Or



2) The cup was lifted away before her fingers even brushed the material.



Or



3) Do you have a better suggestion?
Before her fingers had even brushed its surface, the cup was lifted away.
The second one x
the first one makes sense, both of them do anyway but the first one makes more sense.

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